The chart below give the number of people employed in five types of work in a certain region in Australia in 2001 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart given offers insights into how many people were recruited in five specific spheres, involving sales, accounting, computing, nursing, and farming in a particular Australian area over a period of 7 years, from 2001 and 2008.
From an
overall
perspective, the most striking feature is that the sales sector held the predominant number of employees taken on while
the opposite is true for farming. Meanwhile, almost all fields witnessed a slight upward trend, except for accounting and farming. It is also
evident that there was a remarkable discrepancy between the sales major and the four others.Submitted by lpnthanh on
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