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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Susan, I hope you are having a good
day
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. Thank you for your help take care of my
home
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 and my puppy when I am on
my
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holiday in Japan. I really appreciate that. I will take a flight to Japan at 10 am, on
Feb
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 22, 2023, and will be back at 8
pm
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 on
Feb
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 26. Before I am on my holiday, I would like to give you some ideas on how to look after my
dog
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, Dave, and my
home
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. On
Feb
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 22, I will leave the lunch for my puppy, so you can just go to my
home
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 in the evening. Dave is a two-year-old
dog
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. He is quite energetic. You have seen him several
of
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times when we hang out together.
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, I believe he is familiar with
you
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 accompany as well. Could you please walk with him once
in
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a
day
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, so he can pee outside the house, and put around 200g of
dog
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 food on his plates twice a
day
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? I usually walk with him around 7
pm
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,
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 and give him food around 10 am and 8
pm
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. The
dog
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 food package is put on the second layer of the closet near the refrigerator.
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, can you please turn on the
auto-vacuume
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auto-vacuum
 machine and air filter machine twice a
day
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 when you walk with Dave? It can reduce the furs
flurs
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fleurs
flours
floors
 and dust and refresh the air at my
home
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. I will be back soon at 8
pm
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 on
Feb
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 26. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me at (
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) 666-444-8888. Thanks again for all your help, sincerely. Best regards, Kathy.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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