Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job. Others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give you opinion.

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education than ever before in history.

Consequently

, many people around the world want to enter a

university

to guarantee themselves a good

job

.

However

, others argue that it would be better not to waste time at

university

and go straight into work to get

experience

. Personally, I think that

universities

give you the best long-time working opportunities.

Firstly

, working

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very crucial. We could recall unemployment statistics where even not all graduates of top

universities

can find a

job

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to get internships

while

you are studying.

Universities

give you a wide range of knowledge which can not be substituted with working

experience

,

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if you got a diploma and had some internships, you would get the dream

job

.

Secondly

, it is a

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known fact that the best companies would not employ you after your school graduation.

For instance

, consulting firms like McKinsey have very tough entrance conditions like interviews, Maths

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and other sorts of tests. And I am sure that people with only secondary education would not be able to pass the tests. So you either have to spend a lot of time

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self-preparation or to get a

job

in a worse company. In conclusion, I consider

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it

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very important to get a

university

degree. Working

experience

is very beneficial when you are trying to get a

job

,

however

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it might be not enough to compete with people who finished

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. I maintain that we should do both: study and try to get some working

experience

on internships

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are at the

university

.