The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the poplulation age 65 and above in three countries.
The table illustrates the information and predictions
according to
the change that might occur to the population
age
65 and above in three countries. The data shown is the Replace the word
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percentage
of the population
in Canada, Germany and the UK. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the most predictable change is in Germany during 2030, while
the least one is in the UK in 1988.
First of all, in Canada
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percentage
started at 16% during
1988 and kept increasing until reaching 21% in 2000. The predictable change in the Change preposition
in
percentage
landed on
26% in 2030. Change preposition
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On the other hand
, Germany reached 20% by 1988 and slightly jumped to 25% in 2000. Eventually, the percentage
ended at 30%.
According to
the UK, the predictable percentage
of the population
in 1988 and 2000 were similar by
reaching 14% and 15%, respectively. After that, the number went up significantly and hit 20% in 2030 which was higher than the Change preposition
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population
in 2000 by exactly 5%.Submitted by malak.ayman1 on
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