The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The
graph
below illustrates the statistics( in percentages) of recycled
paper
and
cardboard
.
Glass
containers, aluminium cans, and plastic.
Overall
, it is obvious from the
graph
that the most recycled materials from 1982 to 2010 were
paper
/
cardboard
and
glass
containers.
On the other hand
, the least recycled material was plastic. Looking closer at the
graph
reveals that
paper
/
cardboard
and
glass
containers were the most recycled materials in 1980 with the highest
rates
well over 65% and just over 50%.
However
, the
rates
of recycling both experienced fluctuations over the given years.
Paper
recycling increased from 1982 and reached 70% in 1986.
However
, it fell back dramatically to well under 70% in 1990 and jumped again to 80% in 1996.From around 1996 to 2010 ,
paper
and
cardboard
recycling
rates
declined again and slowly fell back to 70% in 2010.
Rates
of recycling
glass
,
on the other hand
, experienced a significant decrease between 1992 and 1990, falling by 10% followed by a jump to 50% in 1995 after which it increased gradually over the following years reaching over 60% by 22010. Another important trend shown in the
graph
is the increase in
rates
of recycling aluminium recycling which
according to
the
graph
only started in 1986 and from 1986 to 2010 it experienced a sharp rise, peaking in 2010 and reaching nearly 45%.
Rates
of recycling plastic
in contrast
,
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remained the same from the year people started recycling it in 1990 and 2010, only increasing by 10 % over the years.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, on the other hand".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, paper, cardboard, glass, rates with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "jumped" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
  • proportion
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