The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members  across the faculties of a major university in 2012

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compares the proportion of
men
and
women
in academic
staff
in seven different faculties in the University during the year 2012. In general , the university contained more male
staff
members compared to female members in most facilities. Engineering had the most
men
's
staff
whereas
, for
women
it was education . To be specific , most of the male
staff
in universities accounted for engineering , which was 85% that year .
While
for
women
it was quite the opposite with 18 % .
Whereas
, the education faculty had the most female employees , which constituted 72% .
By contrast
,
men
only accounted for a quarter of that division in 2012 . Interestingly medicine was the only faculty in the university which had an almost similar amount of male and female workers and it made up 49% and 50% respectively.
While
the law and science section recorded almost identical trends for both genders of employees with 62% and 60% for
men
and 38% and 40% for
women
.
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