The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compares the proportion of
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in seven different faculties in the University during the year 2012.
In general , the university contained more male Use synonyms
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members compared to female members in most facilities. Engineering had the most Use synonyms
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whereas
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women
it was education .
To be specific , most of the male Use synonyms
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in universities accounted for engineering , which was 85% that year . Use synonyms
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it was quite the opposite with 18 % . Use synonyms
Whereas
, the education faculty had the most female employees , which constituted 72% . Linking Words
By contrast
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men
only accounted for a quarter of that division in 2012 . Interestingly medicine was the only faculty in the university which had an almost similar amount of male and female workers and it made up 49% and 50% respectively. Use synonyms
While
the law and science section recorded almost identical trends for both genders of employees with 62% and 60% for Linking Words
men
and 38% and 40% for Use synonyms
women
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