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The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005.

The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005.
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The line graph highlights data about the percentage of people who
posessed
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possessed
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different
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number
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 of
cars
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 in the UK over 3 decades. At first
glance
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 it can be seen that
,
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apply
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community
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a community
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 who has 1 car had the highest number
while
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 3
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cars
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 owners had the lowest proportion over the period in question. As it comes to the group of owners who had 2
cars
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 it started from about 5% and went up considerably to almost 15% over a decade. People who owned 3
cars
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 slightly increased from under 5% to about 10% over the period. If we look at
no
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 car group the
percenrage
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percentage
 plummeted from under 45% to around 25% and
then
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 it experienced a slight fall during the period. Regarding 1 car
owners
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 the number decreased from 45% to under 40% during the decade
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 it recovered after 1985 and reached the initial figure.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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