The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005.
The line graph highlights data about the percentage of people who
posessed
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possessed
possess
different
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a different
the different
number
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numbers
cars
in the UK over 3 decades.
At first glance
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community
who has 1 car had the highest number Add an article
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while
3 cars
owners had the lowest proportion over the period in question.
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car
cars
it started from about 5% and went up considerably to almost 15% over a decade. People who owned 3 cars
slightly increased from under 5% to about 10% over the period. If we look at no
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the no
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plummeted from under 45% to around 25% and Correct your spelling
percentage
then
it experienced a slight fall during the period. Regarding 1 car owners
the number decreased from 45% to under 40% during the decade Add a comma
,owners
however
it recovered after 1985 and reached the initial figure.Submitted by Abdu.abetayev on
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