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The chart showes the hour spent per week on sport and exercise by young people in england

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The bar chart shows the amount of
time
 that 16 to 24-year-olds in England spend per
week
 on sport and exercise. It is clear from the chart that young
women
 are less active in their leisure
time
 than young
men
. There is a striking difference between the percentages of
men
 and
women
 who prefer not to participate in sports in their free
time
. Almost half of the young
women
 devote no
time
 at all to active leisure pursuits
while
this
 applies to only about a quarter of young
men
. There is a similar difference between the percentages of very active young people. Almost 1 in 5
men
 between the ages of 16 and 24 play sports for 7 or more hours a
week
. The figure for young
women
 is only 5 per cent. A closer examination of the figures for young people who actually play sport reveals that the greatest proportion dedicates between 1 and 3 hours per
week
 to these pastimes.
This
 is true for just over a fifth of both
men
 and
women
. The fact that only two-fifths of young
women
 spend an hour or more a
week
 on sport, compared to approximately two-thirds of young
men
, raises questions about how
to
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fit young
women
are
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in comparison to young
men
.
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