The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998 .

The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998 .
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The table illustrates the manufacturing of
cacao
beans
in North and Central
America
, Africa, Asia, Oceania, South
America
and England over 6 years from 1992 to 1998.
Overall
, it can be seen that in Asia and in South
America
the quantity of produced
cacao
beans
increased significantly higher than in other countries,
although
the development of
cacao
beans
in North and Central
America
stayed the same despite some fluctuations. First of all, in 1992 the most developed place in
production
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the production
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of
cacao
beans
was South
America
, 143 000
tons
respectively;
however
it decreased until 1996 and increased sharply after two years to 389 000
tons
. But, in Asia where manufacturing of
cacao
beans
had been increasing slowly during the whole period, from 119 000
tons
to 436 000
tons
of
cacao
beans
precisely. The other region which made growing up in the development of
cacao
beans
was Oceania and the production rose steadily for 6 years so that reached a peak at 76 890
tons
at the end
of the period.
On the other hand
, in Africa, England,and North and Central
America
releasing of
cacao
beans
fluctuated from 1992 to 1998, so that in Africa and England it fell from 29 000 to 25 000
tons
and 56 000 to 49 000
tons
per year;
however
in spite of changes in manufacturing in the North and the Central
USA
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,USA
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the numbers of
cacao
beans
produced did not change and stayed at 46 000
tons
in 1998.
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