You lost an item while travelling on a bus. An employee of the bus company assisted you in recovering your lost item. Write a letter to the company manager to thank the employee. In your letter, - Describe what you lost and how the employee helped you find

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Dear Manager I am ecstatic and elated to express my sincere gratitude from the bottom of my heart to Mr Ravi who helped me to find my mobile

phone

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despite the huge rush and full pack of the bus and I felt like I was in hell. As you know, the mobile

phone

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is one of the inevitable items in our life and I cannot even think of it my a day without my

phone

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, I do have numerous business contacts and their address too.

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, I am running my whole business with the help of my

phone

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only as I have been holding it ever since I started my first business. I would like to provide a token of thanks to your employee for the extended help. if possible, please let me know the best way to send a gift item to him and I would be happy to send it through a parcel or even any electronic gift card. I cannot thank him enough for his help and whatever he has done for me. I look forward to hearing an update to

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letter with the gift approach and company guidelines. Best Regards Lakshmi.

lakshma999Wed Feb 22 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

198 words

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