The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart indicates how three various
groups
of Canadian residents are in favour of the location of visiting.
Overall
, it can be seen that Canadians generally are the favourite to go to cinemas.
In contrast
, theatres are unable to attract citizens to come an effective way.
First,
in precise,there are 70% of local-born Canadians love to visit cinemas,
along with
65% of new English-speaking
migrants
and 50% of non-English-speaking
migrants
who are in favour of visiting there.
Second,
about 55% of people born in non-English-based countries are most likely to go to the library,
while
approximately 40% of the other two
groups
go there. Zoo is
also
a popular location for 50% of the group of new
migrants
speaking English. it cannot be ignored that there are over 40% of non-
migrants
and 35% of non-English-base
migrants
love to watch animals.
However
, theatre is the least fascinating place of all three
groups
of people with only 10% of non-English-speaking
migrants
and almost a quarter of other
groups
who like to visit there.
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