The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart indicates how three various
groups
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of Canadian residents are in favour of the location of visiting.
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, it can be seen that Canadians generally are the favourite to go to cinemas.
In contrast
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, theatres are unable to attract citizens to come an effective way.
First,
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in precise,there are 70% of local-born Canadians love to visit cinemas,
along with
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65% of new English-speaking
migrants
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and 50% of non-English-speaking
migrants
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who are in favour of visiting there.
Second,
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about 55% of people born in non-English-based countries are most likely to go to the library,
while
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approximately 40% of the other two
groups
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go there. Zoo is
also
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a popular location for 50% of the group of new
migrants
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speaking English. it cannot be ignored that there are over 40% of non-
migrants
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and 35% of non-English-base
migrants
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love to watch animals.
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, theatre is the least fascinating place of all three
groups
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of people with only 10% of non-English-speaking
migrants
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and almost a quarter of other
groups
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who like to visit there.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, migrants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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