The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The following line graph compares the number of novels read by two genders male and female at Burnaby public library between 2011 and 2014.
Overall
, it can be seen that women faced steady growth at the beginning but fell sharply in the end squad ,on the other hand
, experienced a margin increase in the first year and rocketed next
To start with, the difference in the number at the beginning was almost 2000 in favour of females but by 2013 the numbers were equal both reaching 10000. During 2011 and 2012 the number of females rose gradually from over 4000 to 8000, whereas
armed forces saw a slight rise from over 2000 to only 4000.
Next year the statistic for women increased by 2000 from 8000 to 10000 delegation though rose by more than 2 times from 4000 to 10000. During the last
,year females faced a substantial decrease by almost 3000 though servicemen kept increasing and reached the peak of 14000Submitted by Abdu.abetayev on
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