The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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A glance at the column chart and table provided reveals the number of the country's exports by diverse items in 2015 and 2016 and the alteration in each item of exports between 2015 and 2016 by per
cent
.
Overall
, in 2015, the highest income came from the export of petroleum
products
, while
the lowest was from textiles
. In the next year, petroleum
products
remained the top position, whereas
earnings from textiles
and agricultural products
were at the bottom. Additionally
, textile exports experienced significant growth in 2016, while
export of gems and jewellery saw a moderate decline.
In detail, the export of petroleum
products
was the highest, while
textiles
were the lowest, accounting for approximately 60 and 25 billion
dollars
. In 2016, the amount of exported petroleum
and engineered products
were almost the same at around 61 billion
dollars
as well as
income from textiles
and agricultural products
were similar, making up 31 billion
dollars
. In addition
, earnings from exporting gems and jewellery decreased in the latter year by 3 billion
dollars
, accounting for 40 billion
dollars
.
Regarding the table, the amount of exported textiles
experienced a considerable increase of 15.24 per cent
in 2016 in comparison to the year 2015, while
exported gems and jewellery decreased by 5.28 per cent
. Moreover
, income from petroleum
products
and agricultural products
saw a mere growth, accounting for 3 per cent
and 0.81 per cent
respectively.Submitted by adilkhanov.mdr on
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