Some people like to try new things for example places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

Recently it is observed that tourist
places
are being flood
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with
lot
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of
people
and even
variety
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a variety
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of
food
dishes like other continent foods are showing up in each and every
cities
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city
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. Few of them have developed
a
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characteristics
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characteristic
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of trying
unique
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variety of dishes and like to
visit
some unknown famous tourist spots. On
other
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the other
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hand
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people
would like to stick to the same routine of having familiar
food
and keeping visiting
to
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the
places
they know. In
this
essay
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we will discuss
about
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both
behaviors
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but in my
opinion
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it
always
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better to try new and unknown things.
Firstly
, having a character of experimenting
new
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with new
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foods and visiting some unknown
places
will add some adventures to
the
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life. For
an a
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an
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instance trying out new
food
will give
glimpse
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a glimpse
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about
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the
place
where it
was
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originated,
kind
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the kind
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of
food
habituated
people
follow where it was found and it may
also
lead us to pin that
place
in the list of travelling
spot
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spots
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.
Secondly
, visiting new
places
helps to us know that
place
in
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a much
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better way rather than looking into some videos, pictures or reading about the
place
. On
personal
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note
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I had
very
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bad impression
about
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the
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a
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place
called Chennai which resides in
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the south-east
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south-east
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part of India,
due to
the presence of the beach
it
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increases the humidity of the atmosphere and makes us
to
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feel hot even in the winter seasons.
Eventually
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when we
visit
the
place
it was the opposite
although
the afternoon temperature is high when the time hits around half past 5 or 6. A beautiful sunset and high wind breeze
stunts
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us from the perspective we had earlier on the
place
.
Nevertheless
of
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having
this insights
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it
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also
scares us from visiting
the
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places
which are unfamiliar to us because few of the
places
are bound to
native
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a native
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language where they do not encourage about the
common
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commonly
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used language like
hindi
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Hindi
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or English.
People
take it as offending if we did not try to
or
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speak the native
place
language which might make the
visit
as
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one of the nightmares.
To sum
up
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although
we have a lot of challenges when we
visit
unknown
places
or try unknown
food
. It would be better to give
a
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try to have some fun, interesting things that would happen over those things, rather than just having experiences which we are already familiar with.
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  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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