Some people like to try new things for example places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.
Recently it is observed that tourist
places
are being flood
with Change the verb form
are being flooded
are flooding
lot
of Change the article
a lot
people
and even variety
of Correct article usage
a variety
food
dishes like other continent foods are showing up in each and every cities
. Few of them have developed Fix the agreement mistake
city
a
Correct article usage
the
characteristics
of trying Fix the agreement mistake
characteristic
unique
variety of dishes and like to Add an article
a unique
visit
some unknown famous tourist spots. On other
Correct article usage
the other
hand
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,hand
people
would like to stick to the same routine of having familiar food
and keeping visiting to
the Remove the preposition
apply
places
they know. In this
essay
we will discuss Add a comma
,essay
about
both Remove the preposition
apply
behaviors
but in my Change the spelling
behaviours
opinion
it Add a comma
,opinion
always
better to try new and unknown things.
Add a missing verb
is always
Firstly
, having a character of experimenting new
foods and visiting some unknown Change preposition
with new
places
will add some adventures to the
life. For Correct article usage
apply
an a
instance trying out new Choose an article
an
food
will give glimpse
Add an article
a glimpse
about
the Change preposition
of
place
where it was
originated, Unnecessary verb
apply
kind
of Correct article usage
the kind
food
habituated people
follow where it was found and it may also
lead us to pin that place
in the list of travelling spot
.
Fix the agreement mistake
spots
Secondly
, visiting new places
helps to us know that place
in much
better way rather than looking into some videos, pictures or reading about the Add an article
a much
place
. On personal
Add an article
a personal
note
I had Add a comma
,note
very
bad impression Add an article
a very
about
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of
the
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a
place
called Chennai which resides in Add an article
the south-east
south-east
part of India, Correct your spelling
southeast
due to
the presence of the beach it
increases the humidity of the atmosphere and makes us Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
feel hot even in the winter seasons. Change the verb form
apply
Eventually
when we Add a comma
,Eventually
visit
the place
it was the opposite although
the afternoon temperature is high when the time hits around half past 5 or 6. A beautiful sunset and high wind breeze stunts
us from the perspective we had earlier on the Change the verb form
stunt
place
. Nevertheless
of
having Change preposition
apply
this insights
Change the determiner
this insight
these insights
it
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apply
also
scares us from visiting the
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apply
places
which are unfamiliar to us because few of the places
are bound to native
language where they do not encourage about the Add an article
a native
the native
common
used language like Change the adjective
commonly
hindi
or English. Change the capitalization
Hindi
People
take it as offending if we did not try to or
speak the native Correct word choice
apply
place
language which might make the visit
as
one of the nightmares.
Change preposition
apply
To sum
up
Add a comma
,up
although
we have a lot of challenges when we visit
unknown places
or try unknown food
. It would be better to give a
try to have some fun, interesting things that would happen over those things, rather than just having experiences which we are already familiar with.Correct pronoun usage
it a
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