Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that many
people
thinks
that humans should not fight against bad Change the verb form
think
situations
, whilst others disagree and thinks they should try to improve their standards. This
essay agrees that humans should act and try to improve in these situations
.
On the one hand, Humans with will
to act believes they should work more if they are in hopeless Add an article
the will
a will
situations
. In every day
life, there will be Replace the word
everyday
a
Correct article usage
apply
problems
but Correct the article-noun agreement
problem
besides
the difficulty of the problems
, motivated people
tend to fix these problems
and improve their lifestyles by fixing the problems
because that is
the way to become winner
person. Jeff Bezos is a prime example, he tried Correct article usage
a winner
few
companies before Amazon and they all failed. Correct article usage
a few
However
, he never give
up and invent the Amazon and become the second most rich man in the world.
Change the verb form
gives
On the other hand
, People
thinks
that bad Correct subject-verb agreement
think
situations
are their fate and they should accept it. It is wrong because these are just excuses for being lazy and they often say that life is not fair but the major problems
are these people
have no will to act and they believe that nothing can change. Despite this
, there are many people
who succeed their
journey with hard work. My parents are Change preposition
in their
great
Add an article
a great
example
, After they got their first job they hard work for a Fix the agreement mistake
examples
while
and started save
money for their own business. After a Change the form of the verb
saving
while
, they succeed and become more wealthy in their lives but the key point is they are still working hard and never surrender against
bad Change preposition
to
situations
.
To conclude
, Every person will have a
bad Correct article usage
apply
situations
in their lives Correct the article-noun agreement
situation
although
the bad situations
people
should try to improve and eventually, they will have better
life and more money.Add an article
a better
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