you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in it's head office in another country. write a letter to your manager. In your letter: . explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months . say how your work could be done while you're away . ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear sir I am writing you

this

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letter to express my wish to

work

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in the company's head office in Canada for six months. I

work

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sales

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a sales

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team leader in Egypt's office and

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I love my team and the country, I wish to

work

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in the head office in Canada. I believe

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opportunity should be taken as I have been one of the best employees in the company for the past 2 years.

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Also

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I have some relatives in Canada that I have not visited since I joined the company. As for my

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, I am sure that it can be done online via Zoom meetings. I was hoping you could write a letter to recommend me for

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opportunity. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully,

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

132 words

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