Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.

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upholds a decision to conceive, still,

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on her. Nurturing a child is considered a mutual

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of parents and avoiding that can

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must be emphasized to avoid any

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on the child’s upbringing.

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women are much career oriented as

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previous generations & they want much flexibility to pursue their

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their aspirations. In

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pressure of dual

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is not justifiable in anyways.

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serious consequences will come up in terms of children’s emotional security and can put

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require much attention in formidable years and If

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is not able to prioritize the

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of their children

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will create which will put

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their future life. To curb

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must step up and upholds the

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support them.

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the traditional

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of the father is to full fill the financial

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of his family in

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contemporary era Fatherhood

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is much required to manage and support the activities which mothers usually do.

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their children and feeding food to the scion will give more ease

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is on job or doing rest and

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will feel a sense of peace and sharing of

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will be more influential in the

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of the children. To recapitulate, Rearing a child must be considered a mutual

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requires

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to balance the burden of

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on the

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