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Some people say that educational success depends most of the time on having a good teacher. Other say that attitude of students also matters? Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #success #time #teacher #attitude #students #matters
Education
 is the key factor for success.Over the few
dacdes
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decades
,the views toward the
education
 system had dramatically changed, all over the world.some
individual
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 thought good
education
 is directly proportional to the best teacher,
while
other
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others
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 said that
it's
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its
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students
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students'
student's
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 own ability matters.I would explain in
this
 essay both
views
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my views
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 and my opinion.
Due to
the
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various reasons, people thought good
teachers
 are pillars of
the
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success. As children are not much aware
about
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 the system of
the
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education
 they need proper guidelines from experts ones.
Additional
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, all
students
 have not same thoughts ,emotions and ability so
for
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support and
encourages
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 in their
education
 best
teachers
 is essential.
For example
, famous psychologist Albert
Bundura
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Bandura
 said that children are like
the
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wet
muds
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, ( as they can
made
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 any pots)
like
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that even children
makes
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 them
according to
 our wishes so,if they did not get
best
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 guidance they would take
wrong
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the wrong
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paths
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path
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. On the other
hands
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hand
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,
this
 is the technology era, without individual guidelines we can be successful in life . As there are so many websites,
app
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apps
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,
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and video's
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video's
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videos
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 which can guide
students
 in any field.
For example
, if a student
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are not interest
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 in science he / she
have
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has
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passion
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a passion
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 towards sports even a
scientic
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scientific
scientist
 cannot teach them science.
Furthermore
, Mr Mark who is the founder of
facebook
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 was not guided
from
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teachers
 or trainers he become
younger
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a younger
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millionear
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millionaire
million
 by
its
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his
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 curiosity and
zeels
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feels
heels
peels
. In my opinion, I don't thinks
best
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the best
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teachers
 are essential in
this
 era as in undeveloped countries like Nepal
students
 can't gets books in the
himalayan
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 regions (rural area) they manage their
education
 from
youtubes
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YouTube
 and websites. In conclusion,
In
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 some
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extent
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extents
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 proper guidelines are essential but not
in
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all the
times
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time
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its
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 all depends on ability.
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