In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It may look like going to a college and studying

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fancy degree, is all you need to score a

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job

and successful career but there

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a lot of unemployed, qualified fresh

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essay will present a few reasons and possible solutions to

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problem. Our world has a very fast pace, technologies are evolving very fast,

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change their demanded skills rapidly, which makes fresh

graduates

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skills that are irrelevant in the new

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market

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most

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unemployed

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graduates

just don't

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the right experience for the

job

market

. Another

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important

factor is that qualification

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necessarily make someone right for the position.

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a modern nowadays engineer

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must

also

know how to look for a

job

, write a good resume and be familiar with other subjects not related to engineering itself. Nowadays we can

also

see that more and more businesses require a few years of experience in relatively new fields, like artificial

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intelligence

.

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is a hot topic to study, which brings a lot of fresh

graduates

to the

job

market

, but the industry needs highly skilled employees in

this

field.

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many qualified professionals don't

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the required experience to get a

job

in

this

field. There are a number of solutions, the first is that universities need to adapt the curriculum to the dynamic world we live in, maybe even provide an internship at a relevant business.

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has two goals, first is to bridge the gap

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technologies and skills.

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is to provide the student with a real

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experience

he or she can eventually show future employers. Governments can

also

get involved and give incentives to companies in order to get more inexperienced professionals hired.

Buinesses

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Businesses

might pay less tax or get other benefits for employing more inexperienced

graduates

. In order to provide the

roght

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right

tools for the

job

search, the government can

subsedize

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subsidise

resume writing courses and provide

further

job

search tools for qualified applicants. These solutions in my opinion will help the entire

market

itself and not just the

graduates

. So

to conclude

my opinion and my general view on the subject, I think colleges and universities need to adapt and teach closely to the

market

needs, governments should get involved and provide help in that matter,

eventually

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everyone involved will benefit

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such

measures.