Public health is becoming an urgent issue now a days. some argue that government should create nutrition ad food choice law to improve public health while others believe that it is a matter of personal choice and responsibility.  Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some argue that

government

should be responsible

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public

health

while

others believe it is the sole responsibility of the

people

because nowadays

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people

's

health

is one of the major

concern

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concerns

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.

Although

, others believe that

government

should combat malnutrition in the country, having

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good

health

should be more concerning to the citizens.  It is said to believe that

government

should

should

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ensure that the

people

are having enough food to avoid hunger. They are responsible

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monitoring the

amount

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of stocks available in the country and should subsidize the value for the benefit of the citizens.

For instance

, the food and drug administration is the agency that protects and

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the rights to

health

of

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Filipinos and

resulted

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in

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a decrease

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decrease

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decreased

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number of malnutrition in the nation.

However

, I believe that an individual should be responsible

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maintaining

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good

health

.

On the other hand

, having a healthy body is a personal choice.

People

should be more optimistic in looking for one's welfare and not relying

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the

government

. Having

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good

health

is crucial to avoid straining the

government

's budget for the budget should be allotted

in

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more important projects

such

as road

infrastracture

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infrastructure

and providing jobs to

people

.

For example

, eating a

balance

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diet and

exrecises

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exercises

exercise

are

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one of the many ways on improving

health

.  In conclusion, public

health

is something

should

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that should

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be address

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nowadays.

Although

, others believe that

government

should promote

health

to every mankind. I believe that

people

should be more

concern

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with their own

body

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bodies

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to achieve

a

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good

health

. As the saying says "

Health

is Wealth".