You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
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The given pie charts indicate how much
time
Use synonyms
were
spent Change the verb form
was
by
6 different activities which Change preposition
on
worker
Replace the word
work
in
Linking Words
particular
country did in 1958 and 2008.
Correct article usage
a particular
Overall
, Linking Words
the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
people spent their Change preposition
apply
time
Use synonyms
on
working, and the second Change preposition
apply
popular
Correct quantifier usage
most popular
of
activity was sleeping.
In detail, the percentage of working was occupied 33% in 1958, Change preposition
apply
while
that of working was 42% in 2008. 8% of people spent their Linking Words
time
Use synonyms
on
relaxing at home in 1958, which was Change preposition
apply
Add an article
an increase
increase
Wrong verb form
increased
at
13% in 2008. In terms of travel to work and Change preposition
to
toehr
interests Correct your spelling
other
of
playing sports, the percentage was 2% and 6% in 1958, each. Those categories Change preposition
in
was
increased in 2008 (8% and 8%).
Unnecessary verb
apply
In contrast
, 32% of people spent their Linking Words
time
Use synonyms
on
sleeping in 1958, which was much Change preposition
apply
than
the percentage of 2008's sleeping category (25%). Especially, the figure for going out stood up Correct quantifier usage
more than
19
% in 1958, which was Change preposition
at 19
decrease
Wrong verb form
decreased
at
6% in 2008.Change preposition
to
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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