In some countries most people prefer to rent their houses rather than buy their houses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a house?
Buying
houses
is Use synonyms
an
biggest issue nowadays, they are more expensive . So only renting is the major option for them . In Change the article
the
few
nations , renting is vastly done by Correct article usage
a few
public
Add an article
the public
instead
of Linking Words
owing
the house . I discuss the pros and cons of renting an Correct your spelling
owning
Use synonyms
houses
or Fix the agreement mistake
house
appartment
.
Correct your spelling
apartment
apartments
To begin
with, renting Linking Words
an
rather that it Change the article
a
have
more significant aspects. Many Change the verb form
has
people
do private services as transferable jobs so they have Use synonyms
a
best way for renting Change the article
the
it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
Although
, there are others factors of renting Linking Words
Correct pronoun usage
that is
is
accurate, many Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
are living in criminals area . So they can pick Use synonyms
their
belongings and move to another better place for living. Change preposition
up their
Therefore
, nowadays it is Linking Words
also
impossible for Linking Words
Add an article
a middle
the middle
middle class
Add a hyphen
middle-class
family
to buy Fix the agreement mistake
families
own
Correct pronoun usage
their own
houses
.For , example, homes are quite Use synonyms
more
expensive with increased Correct quantifier usage
apply
of
dearness. clearly, it is easier for moving and exploring the world.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, there are numerous negative consequences of not buying Linking Words
an
house. Change the article
a
Firstly
, there Linking Words
are
Change the verb form
is
major
Add an article
a major
complication
of high rates and maintenance issues. Fix the agreement mistake
complications
People
are more Use synonyms
tenced
, Correct your spelling
tense
depressed
. For, instance the study Correct word choice
and depressed
shown
that they do not save money future to their children's expenses. Wrong verb form
shows
Moreover
, there are more restrictions in renting Linking Words
houses
like Use synonyms
no
pets policy and Correct article usage
the no
also
Linking Words
owers
do not give permission to build any small construction or things . So renting Correct your spelling
owners
have
a huge disadvantage,but Correct subject-verb agreement
has
people
have Use synonyms
compulsion
to live there .
In conclusion, Change the article
the compulsion
people
have Use synonyms
compulsion
to chooseChange the article
the compulsion
renting
homes. Change the verb form
to rent
However
, in Linking Words
this
Linking Words
fast -paced
life Add a hyphen
fast-paced
people
have to buy Use synonyms
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
a house
houses
houses
for various reasons Use synonyms
as
in the pandemic permanent residences have more pros.Change preposition
apply
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...