You are studying for an exam, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. State how this qualification helps your job or company.

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Dear Kim, Even though I fully appreciate that our company is pretty busy nowadays, I am writing

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letter to request 2 weeks off from work to complete a qualification on which I'm currently working. As I mentioned about it before, I recently began to study computer engineering. To get qualified

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the official institution, It is inevitable to take an exam.

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, I have already applied for the exam in 2 weeks. During the given time, I have to concentrate on the exam thoroughly. If you allow me to get 2 weeks off, I can entirely spend the time

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studying. At the same time, I believe that

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qualification will contribute to our company in the future. Currently, knowledge of computer engineering is necessary

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the field that we are in. It will help us to understand and communicate with our customers more easily. It is obvious that we can give a better impression to our customers. In

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regard, the qualification is going to make us look more dependable and trustworthy. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. I appreciate all the efforts that you put in. Yours faithfully, Jeongseo Choi

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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