Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Knowingly or unknowingly everything on earth is really getting affected by human behaviour. Human actions not only have a negative impact on animals , but
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it is damaging our environment. In
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essay, I am going to give an illustration of both sides including my opinion.
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, people are not taking care of the environment as much as they are responsible to do it. They are creating pollution because of not separating wet disposal and dry disposal. Because of that, sometimes
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this elastic disposals
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get eaten by animals and they end up dying.
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to that, if
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disposals are not getting evaluated properly, it ultimately creates chaos in nature.
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is only one example, but things
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as cutting trees and using them for income purpose is
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destructing mother nature and creatures. There are multiple solutions to
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, everyone should do some little things in order to improve environmental situations.
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, people should divide their disposals
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their categories. If we discard
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well,
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plants or the surrounding areas would not get disturbed. Most importantly, everyone should create awareness about all
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, so that people will get to know about it, ultimately it will lead to and very good impact on green areas
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, the government should implement zero waste and plastic-free concepts in every state. To summarise, I agree that human activities are really affecting plants and animals,
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it
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harms our biological diversity and ecosystem. To avoid
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, humans should start by making small changes in their regular habitat
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as using polythene bags
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and using public transport.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • extinct
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • habitat destruction
  • mitigate
  • reverse
  • stricter regulations
  • protected areas
  • endangered species
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • biodiversity
  • consequences
  • renewable energy sources
  • organic farming
  • eco-tourism
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • natural ecosystems
  • preserve biodiversity
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