Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

Some individuals believe that
university
courses
should be aligned with the
requirement
in
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the
job
market
,
whereas
others believe those causes should only provide knowledge regardless of its usefulness in the workplace. I strongly believe that universities should function to provide
graduates
that have skills in
current
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job
market
. Teaching
courses
that
useless
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to the
job
market
create a few problems. The first issue is unemployment. If someone
get
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a degrees
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pending more than 4 years which is not recognised in the
job
market
, that person becomes jobless.
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that
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then
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500 1000
graduates
in Sri Lanka who
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not have a proper
job
for the degree. The second problem is the unnecessary cost for
government
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.
Generally
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governments
designing
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high education
programs
that
matches
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to
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the
requirement
in
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different
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trending
industry
.
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spend a lot of money in order to facilitate students with these
courses
full stuff it will be a waste if
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is provide
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courses
just to level up knowledge without getting a proper return on that expenses. Considering these reasons universities should pass
or
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graduates
who have
skills
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the skills
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needed in the
industry
. The
programs
should design
of
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analysing
requirement
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requirements
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in the industries. By doing that
University
is can provide
high
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skilled
graduates
to
the
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society. Which
generate
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higher demand in the course
as well as
in the related
industry
. For an
instance
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it has become a trend in the present.
Thus
, many
university's
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provide
it related
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it-related
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courses
to facilitate the
industry
requirement
. And their hand, unemployment can be solved by producing
graduates
who have useful skills.
For example
, if Sri Lankan universities provide updated degrees
instead
of
old fashioned
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useless
programs
employment can be solved easily. For the
mom
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it can
cutoff
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all the unnecessary expenses.
To conclude
, providing
University
programs
that I
useful
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to the
job
market
is highly necessary as it brings a lot of benefits
such
as reducing unemployment, increasing demand in the
job
market
, reduce unwanted expenses in
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sector.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Lifelong learning
  • Holistic development
  • Vocational training
  • Industry-specific competencies
  • Critical thinking
  • Creative problem-solving
  • Academic research
  • Intellectual development
  • Ethics and values
  • Societal contribution
  • Job market demands
  • Practical training
  • Internships
  • Knowledge advancement
  • Global challenges
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