On the recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the recipient manager of your insurance company. Describe the item you lost. Explain how you lost it. Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I recently lost my digital camera

while

on a holiday in Shimla. The camera is a black conon and it cost $1500 when I bought it

last

month. It has a resolution of 20 megapixels and was in a brown leather case with my name on it.

Furthermore

, I lost it when I was having coffee with my husband in the cafe on a coffee day on mall road, Shimla. We had been at the coffee shop for around 45 minutes and when I noticed it was missing. All in all, I am entitled in claiming the value of the above-mentioned item

as well as

request that you send me detail on what I need to do to proceed.

Besides

this

, my camera is a very special item for me because it was gifted by my parents on my 28th birthday

that is

why I will find it at any cost. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Eva Smith.

Submitted by rajveersra55 on Sun Feb 26 2023

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8 paragraphs

173 words

8.50

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable possession
insurance claim
misplace
irreplaceable
receipt
policyholder
reimbursement
coverage
claim number
deductible
documentation
authenticate
liability
premium
accidental loss
indemnity
beneficiary
contact details
substantiate
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