Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together.

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How do you do, I hope you feeling well. I am very glad when you asked about recommendations for new
sports
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for me. Nowadays, outdoor
sports
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are very difficult to play, and because of that
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are dependent on weather Situations and time.
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I would recommend you to do indoor
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. There are a lot of indoor
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to play, but I think better and most suitable and interesting
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that I recommend for you to play
badminton
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. It has wider areas to learn and it can play with just one opposite player minimum for individual play, and a maximum of four players for team play, and
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you wouldn’t worry about the weather or you can manage your playing time with your working schedule.
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is the main reason to recommend
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sport to you.
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, I am
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lately started to play
badminton
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with some friends for two days per week at Kadolkale Indoor stadium for two hours per day. In the first ,hour we practice with a professional
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instructor to gain better
badminton
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skills for us. I think
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very useful for you to learn about
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well. And we can play together,
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very enjoyable for us. I think you will be interested in my advice, I hope your reply as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Asanka
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advice
  • recommend
  • suitable
  • learn
  • coach
  • lessons
  • tutorial videos
  • practice
  • tennis club
  • group
  • schedule
  • regularly
  • participants
  • tournaments
  • friendly matches
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