The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts give data about
age
structure comparisons in India and France. The figures in the study was
collected in Change the verb form
were
year
1984.
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the year
Overall
, more people in France were able to reach the age
of more than 85 years
old and majority
of them are women. Add an article
the majority
a majority
Whereas
in India, there were
Change the verb form
was
equal
proportion of Add an article
the equal
an equal
male
and females who got to reach the Fix the agreement mistake
males
age
of 70 and above.
In detail, he
highest Correct your spelling
the
age
bracket recorded was 30-35 years
old with about 4% in both men and women while
the lowest is the age
of more than 85 years
old. In addition
, 85 years
old and above is the oldest age
that people in France were able to reach. Through the years
, it is noted that most of them are females.
While
in India, their overall
population were only able to make at the age
of more than 70 years
old. When they are born, it is noted that the proportion of female and male newborns are almost equal in percentages and these portions for each gender continued until they reach the age
of 70. Although
, their population was consistently decreasing in the 70 years
time. However
, when they step the age
of 70 and above, it significantly rise
from roughly a Change the verb form
rises
percent
to approximately 1.5 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
on
both genders.Change preposition
for
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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