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Some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, Hơever, believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Dicuss both these views and give your opinion

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In
this
 ,era all young individuals are believed to have the liberty to
act
 as they like.
although
, some part of
the
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society
also
 feels that young
people
 should follow and
act
 as per their
tradition
. But, it is hard to say who is right or wrong. It is obvious that a big part of the population in these times
are
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 being detached from their culture and
tradition
, mainly
due to
 the modern way of life and thinking.
However
, a study was conducted by college students in India. The study was about comparing the opinion of various
people
 who were born in the 1900s and early 2000. The result stated that the opinions of
people
 who were born in the 1900s were very strong towards their religion, culture and
tradition
. On the other ,hand
people
 born in the 2000s were not fond of their traditions
due to
 western influence on Indian
society
.
Therefore
, the young section of
society
 should have knowledge about their traditions. Apparently, one should
also
 have the freedom to
act
 as per their will, and should not be forced to follow the traces of
society
. In many
studies
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 it's been proven that the younger population who are restricted from doing the things they like
due to
 age and other factors face serious as they become an adult. Adults when they were young they were forced and restricted to
act
 on their own
due to
 a strong sense of culture and
tradition
 of
society
. but in the current time
period
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 young
people
 have the freedom to behave as individuals
due to
 modernisation.
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