The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: – A brief introduction of yourself – Your experience and relevant skills – Why you want the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with the regard to

apply

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applying

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for the vacancy you have advertised for your

school

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library for

the

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apply

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next summer vacation.

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with, I want to give a short introduction about

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myself

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. I am a

post graduate

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postgraduate

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student doing my B.Sc. in Sociology. I usually do

part time

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part-time

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job

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jobs

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during

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summer break to enrich my professional experience. In the

last

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two years, I was

incharge

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in charge

of a librarian

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another

school

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near my house.

Thus

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, I know how it works as a librarian.

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, as my study purpose , I regularly have to communicate with various people which gives extra advantage

while

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managing a library.Considering my previous experience, I firmly believe, I would be a good match for the position.

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, I have recently shifted my house near to your

school

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. So, if I will get

this

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job , it will be highly beneficial for me.

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, your

school

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is one

the

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of the

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renowned institutions in the town. So, working for you will definitely give

some

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me some

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advantages

for

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my future career. Regards, Mymuna

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

180 words

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