The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: – A brief introduction of yourself – Your experience and relevant skills – Why you want the job

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with the regard to
apply
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for the vacancy you have advertised for your
school
library for
the
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apply
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next summer vacation.
To begin
with, I want to give a short introduction about
me
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myself
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. I am a
post graduate
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postgraduate
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student doing my B.Sc. in Sociology. I usually do
part time
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job
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in
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during
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summer break to enrich my professional experience. In the
last
two years, I was
incharge
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in charge
of a librarian
in
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at
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another
school
near my house.
Thus
, I know how it works as a librarian.
Besides
, as my study purpose , I regularly have to communicate with various people which gives extra advantage
while
managing a library.Considering my previous experience, I firmly believe, I would be a good match for the position.
In addition
, I have recently shifted my house near to your
school
. So, if I will get
this
job , it will be highly beneficial for me.
Also
, your
school
is one
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renowned institutions in the town. So, working for you will definitely give
some
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me some
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advantages
for
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to
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my future career. Regards, Mymuna
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