The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph details the amount of
tea
and coffee
in tonnes
imported by 4 different countries namely Canada
, the US, the UK
, and Germany
. From an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the UK
is the largest importer of tea
. Canada
, US
and Correct article usage
the US
Germany
import coffee
more than tea
.
The amount of tea
imported by the UK
is around 80000 tonnes
making them the largest importer of tea
. The amount of coffee
imported by the UK
is around 30000 tonnes
which is the lowest in comparison with Germany
, the US, and Canada
. Germany
brings in 50000 tonnes
becoming the largest importer of coffee
.
Canada
and US share a similar figure in terms of importing both coffee
and tea
. 20000 tonnes
of tea
are brought into Canada
levelling off with the US. Import of coffee
scales around 40000 in the US compared to Canada
slightly below 40000.Submitted by namzadtp.tp on
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