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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph details the amount of
tea
 and
coffee
 in
tonnes
 imported by 4 different countries namely
Canada
, the US, the
UK
, and
Germany
. From an
overall
 perspective, it is readily apparent that the
UK
 is the largest importer of
tea
.
Canada
,
US
Correct article usage
the US
show examples
 and
Germany
 import
coffee
 more than
tea
. The amount of
tea
 imported by the
UK
 is around 80000
tonnes
 making them the largest importer of
tea
. The amount of
coffee
 imported by the
UK
 is around 30000
tonnes
 which is the lowest in comparison with
Germany
, the US, and
Canada
.
Germany
 brings in 50000
tonnes
 becoming the largest importer of
coffee
.
Canada
 and US share a similar figure in terms of importing both
coffee
 and
tea
. 20000
tonnes
 of
tea
 are brought into
Canada
 levelling off with the US. Import of
coffee
 scales around 40000 in the US compared to
Canada
 slightly below 40000.
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