The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and charts higher
displays
the sources of Change the verb form
display
police
budget
in 2017 and 2018 in a British area, and in which ways the budgets were spent.
It can be seen from the table that police
budgets of this
particular area came from three sources: national government, local taxes and others. The government provided the largest proportion of the budget
, namely 175.5 million
pounds
in 2017 and 177.8 million
pounds
in 2018. The second largest provider of the budget
was local taxes, the amount of which used on police
Correct article usage
the police
budget
largely increased from 91.2 million
pounds
in 2017 to 102.3 million
pounds
in 2018. The amount of budget
from other resources remained nearly equal in the two years, around 38 million
pounds
. In total, the police
system hadAdd an article
a
budget
in 2018 compared to the year before.
As of
how the budgets were spent, Change preposition
for
it is clear that
in both years, salaries for officers and staff accounted for the largest proportion of the spending, and the percentage decreased from 75% to 69% in 2018. More money were
used on technology in 2018, and the proportion rose to 14% from 8%. The percentage ofChange the verb form
was
Correct article usage
the
budget
spent on buildings and transport stayed the same, which was 17%, in 2017 and 2018.Submitted by rachel_0713 on
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