The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts
displays
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the sources of
police
budget
in 2017 and 2018 in a British area, and in which ways the budgets were spent. It can be seen from the table that
police
budgets of
this
particular area came from three sources: national government, local taxes and others. The government provided the largest proportion of the
budget
, namely 175.5
million
pounds
in 2017 and 177.8
million
pounds
in 2018. The second largest provider of the
budget
was local taxes, the amount of which used on
police
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budget
largely increased from 91.2
million
pounds
in 2017 to 102.3
million
pounds
in 2018. The amount of
budget
from other resources remained nearly equal in the two years, around 38
million
pounds
. In total, the
police
system had
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higher
budget
in 2018 compared to the year before. As
of
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how the budgets were spent,
it is clear that
in both years, salaries for officers and staff accounted for the largest proportion of the spending, and the percentage decreased from 75% to 69% in 2018. More money
were
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used on technology in 2018, and the proportion rose to 14% from 8%. The percentage of
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budget
spent on buildings and transport stayed the same, which was 17%, in 2017 and 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, budget, million, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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