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Many people believe that playing games and tv programs is beneficial but others say it doesnt improve the mental ability of children . What extend do you agree or disagree.

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Lots of people tend to think that video
games
 and
TV
 programs are not good for
children
's development.
However
, I am not the one. In
this
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 I will try to prove that innovative forms of entertaining content are as good for
children
 as traditional ones.
To begin
 with, video
games
 are giving the player unimaginable freedom in action. Open-world
games
,
such
 as Minecraft,
for example
, are good to improve a child's creativity. Logical
games
 with lots of problems to solve are improving critical thinking. If we believe the
last
 psychological researches, even
games
 that could look cruel at first sight, are good to decrease stress levels.
Nevertheless
, parents should limit the time
children
 spend at the computer, as it is stressful for the young brain to focus on electronics for a long time. Concerning
TV
 Programs, my opinion is a little bit different. It's hard to predict the affection, as there are plenty of various shows with different topics and ideas. Unfortunately, many programs we have on
TV
 are really stupid and silly. I would prefer to restrict my kid from
such
 content. Still, there are good shows on
TV
, ones meeting educational and developmental purposes.
To sum up
, I believe that the notion of
games
 and
TV
 shows
,
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 are good for the development of
children
's mental abilities. As it was for centuries,
games
 are the best way for kids to get to know the world
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them around
.
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