The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two graphs compare the
consumption
of
water
on average and the
water
application in different cities in Australia
last
year.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Perth accounted for the largest
consumption
compared to other cities. And the amount of
water
applied to the agricultural subject, mining just consumed little
water
in all categories
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Looking
further
, the
consumption
of
water
in Perth was the highest position at 300
kiloliters
. And followed by Brisbane and Adelaide, with around 250
kiloliters
annually.
However
, Sydney residents just consumed 200
kiloliters
last
year, which was just lower than those in Adelaide. In Canberra and Melbourne, the figures almost remained half that of Perth, which just had 150
kiloliters
.
According to
the second graph, most of the
water
was being used in agriculture at 67%. And next one was households where 9% of
water
was consumed by residents. 7% of
water
was being used in the aspect of public
water
service,
whereas
the electricity and gas supply had the same level of
consumption
. And other aspects of
consumption
just were below 5%, and 2% of mining was the lowest application in 2014.
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