The chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between the 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The bar chart depicts the proportion of residents who owned and rented lodging in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
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, households in both leased and owned accommodation slightly fluctuated over the 8
years
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. It is evident that there is an almost equal
rate
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from 1939 to 2001 in both residential,
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there is a small dip between those
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. At the beginning of 1918, bought lodging has become popular and its
rate
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soared to approximately 78% until it slowly fell to almost 70% for the following 2
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. In the succeeding
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, the number of households in owned place consistently declined and reached just over 30% in the year 2001,
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a slight resurgence happened the following year with a
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of almost 40%, respectively.
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, families in rented places started at a noticeably low percentage
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just over 20%,
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, it rose to around 33% in 1939 and 1953. In 1971, both households paralleled each other with an equal
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of 50%. On other hand, rented accommodation continuously rocketed and reached its peak of just under 60% before it decreased to around 65%
at the end
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of the period.
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