Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

University has been serving people to develop their
knowledge
from the
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accident
ancient
.Recently it is argued by some thinkers of the society that
this
insitution
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institution
should provide
both
knowledge
and
skill
whih
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is required
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the
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job site
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,
while
others believe that it should function for the real
knowledge
for its own specific goal.
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will discuss
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both
view of it.I totally agree with
obtainning knowlege
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obtaining knowledge
and
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skill
skills
as part of their lessons. The
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tertiary
education has aimed and planned a curriculum and
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syllabus
to uplift the
knowlege
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knowledge
of the
students
in a limited duration of time.It is important to do research on a topic and become
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of that particular
subject
.The theory which has
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learnt from the book or
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research
has to go
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and deeper
it it
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.The more
reasearch
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research
the better
understing
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understanding
of the topic.The
trainned professers
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trained professors
assist
students
to make
understing
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understanding
understating
of the
subject
by following a particular
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pattern
part
.
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A
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particular
subject
like physics or
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Chemistry
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understanding and full
knowledge
in order to Master
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them.
Labarotory
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Laboratory
is available in the university
,
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so that the
students
can have a better understanding of the
subject
. Undoubtedly
this
educational institution provides
the
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knowledge
in a true
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sense
by following the methods,but it is
also
impotant
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important
to
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students
to know the things or obtain
knowleges
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knowledge
which will help in their practical life.Educated are those who learned much ,remembered much and made use of their learning in practical life are the true
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sense
essence
of
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educated person.Spending after 4 years of time
students
have
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to go to
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a job
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job
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and earn their bread and butter and support family.It is worthless to join another few
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for the
skill
trainning
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training
.After the
completation
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completion
of graduation,
instead
of getting a certificate for the
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course
cause
, it is more beneficial if pupils achieve
both
knowledge
and
skill
. In conclusion ,It can not be denied that in
tersery
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tertiary
education, the
students
should obtain true
knowledge
of the topic,but
my
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point of view there should be
both
skill
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training
and
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mastering
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in
knowledge
so that they will jump into the work with full of zill and confidence .
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