The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of employees by their sex for various fields of the university in the specific year.

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, we can see from the graph that the biggest difference in the percentage of

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and women members is in

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engineering with the domination of males

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in education there is the opposite situation with the majority of females. The vast percentage of

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is in the engineering path 85 %

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there is only 18 per

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of women. There are only two fields where the proportion of female academic staff members is higher than

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ones, the first one is art with 58 per

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of women and 42 % of

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and in

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there is 72 % of female employees and only 38 per

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males. Equality accounted

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in medicine with approximately 50 to 50 per

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. In science, business and law the male figures are overweight the females and are estimated at about 60 %, respectively.