The pie charts below show the comparison different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

The pie charts below show the comparison different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.
The given pie graphs elucidate diverse sorts of
energy
production
in France in 1995 and 2005
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and illustrate the different quotas for five types of
energy
, including gas, coal, petrol, nuclear, and others. In general, coal was continuously the main output; meanwhile, with the decrease in the proportion of petro, all other four categories of
energy
production
went upward throughout the period. Looking into details, the largest amount of
energy
production
in 1985 was coal, accounting for 29.80%, followed by gas (29.63%) and petroleum (29.27%) with narrow differences.
In addition
, nuclear
energy
merely contributed to 6.40% of the whole yield, and other resources made up 4.90%. Turning to
further
details, it can be seen that coal was still the dominant
energy
-producing industry in 2005, with a slight increase of 1.13% in comparison to 1995.
Likewise
, the
production
volume of gas kept a high level, representing 30.31% of the whole
energy
generation in 2015.
However
, there was a noticeable reduction in petro
production
, from 29.27% to 19.55%, which means the
production
of petro was curtailed to 3 in 5 as the previous proportion. On top of that, the generation of both nuclear and other
energy
grew in 1995, the former touched 10.10% and the latter reached 9.10%.
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