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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

#people #universities #graduates #skills #workplace #function #university #access #sake
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To tell the truth, many students depend on
university
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knowledge
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 and
skills
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 and Some people think that
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 certification provides
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 and
skills
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 only, but I disagree with them. I go to discuss the ideas students about and compare
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work
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 and
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.
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, more students believed in the
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 that can take with levels of
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 from my perspective, I think the
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 reached to requirement level from practice.
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, from my experience, I learn from
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 around 20% in the remaining duration of the 80% l get myself. Today workplace on privet companies or the government needed to efficient and strong learn person. In the present time we live in an internet world, which means much Information is available between fingers just went
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 any student or employee could gain
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, and experience, learn a new department,
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 remotely on the internet, and
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 at the same time before graduating.
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, increases your skill you can begin with volunteering, in my opinion,
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 is a good idea to prepare to
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 after graduating directly.
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, if you put a plan to learn every month new
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