The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the amount of
money
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spent in pounds on five consumer goods (cars, computers, books, perfume and
cameras
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) in
France
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and
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UK
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the UK
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in 2010.
Overall
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,
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UK
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the UK
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spent more
money
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on consumer goods than
France
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in the period given. Both
France
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and
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UK
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the UK
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spent most of their
money
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on cars
whereas
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the least amount of
money
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was spent on perfume in
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UK
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the UK
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compared to
cameras
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in
France
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.
Furthermore
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, the most significant difference in
expenditure
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between the two countries was on
cameras
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. In terms of cars, people in
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UK
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the UK
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spent about £450,000 on
this
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as opposed to
French
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the French
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at £400,000.
Similarly
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, the
Brittish
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British
expenditure
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was higher on books than the Francen (around £400,000 and £300,000 respectively). In
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UK
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the UK
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,
expenditure
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on
cameras
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(just over £350,000) was over double that of
France
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, which was only £150,000.
On the other hand
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, the amount of
money
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paid out on the remaining goods was higher in
France
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. Above £350,000 was spent by
French
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the French
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on computers which was slightly more than the
Brittish
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British
who spent exactly £350,000. Neither of the countries spent much on perfume which accounted for £200,000 of
expenditure
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in
France
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but under £150,000 in
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UK
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the UK
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, cameras, france, uk, expenditure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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