The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the amount of
money
spent in pounds on five consumer goods (cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras
) in France
and UK
in 2010. Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, UK
spent more Correct article usage
the UK
money
on consumer goods than France
in the period given. Both France
and UK
spent most of their Correct article usage
the UK
money
on cars whereas
the least amount of money
was spent on perfume in UK
compared to Correct article usage
the UK
cameras
in France
. Furthermore
, the most significant difference in expenditure
between the two countries was on cameras
. In terms of cars, people in UK
spent about £450,000 on Correct article usage
the UK
this
as opposed to French
at £400,000. Correct article usage
the French
Similarly
, the Brittish
Correct your spelling
British
expenditure
was higher on books than the Francen (around £400,000 and £300,000 respectively). In UK
, Correct article usage
the UK
expenditure
on cameras
(just over £350,000) was over double that of France
, which was only £150,000. On the other hand
, the amount of money
paid out on the remaining goods was higher in France
. Above £350,000 was spent by French
on computers which was slightly more than the Correct article usage
the French
Brittish
who spent exactly £350,000. Neither of the countries spent much on perfume which accounted for £200,000 of Correct your spelling
British
expenditure
in France
but under £150,000 in UK
.Correct article usage
the UK
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