The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams showcase the data about the global
population
from 1800 to 2100.
Furthermore
, the graphs illustrate the number of people living in distinct areas since 2015.
Overall
, by 1800 the growth of the
population
started from 1000 million and
then
showed an upward trend. In 1920 the number of people around the world fluctuated;
however
since 1960 increased dramatically.
According to
the graph, the pick of the global community in 2040 will reach approximately 8000 million but in the next decade, it will decline sharply. The bar chart demonstrates detailed information about how many dwellers live in developed and developing urban regions. The number of citizens who live in developing countries shows gradually raise from almost 2000 to 4000 million.
On the other hand
, the
population
of individuals decreases during the period in question, starting with just over 1200 and finishing with almost 1000.
To conclude
, the world
population
increases from 1800 to 2100 but citizens live in developing countries
instead
of developed ones.
Submitted by abay.serikov on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: