The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate how Grange
Park
has developed over a period of 103 years.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the area witnessed dramatic changes with regard to the construction o new facilities, the building of a new amphitheatre, and the relocation of a rose
garden
and seats.
In 1920, there was a stage
for musicians to the west of the park
and 2 rose
gardens were located south and north sides of the stage
. Another rose
garden
was placed to the northeast of the site. In the middle of the park
, a fountain was placed. There was a pond on the upper east side and a glasshouse on the lower east side.
Over the course of the given period, the stage
was replaced with an amphitheatre for concerts and the rose
garden
which was to the south of the stage
in 1920 was relocated into the middle of the park
. The glasshouse was demolished and a water feature was constructed instead
. Moreover
, the pond and the rose
garden
which were in the north-east previously were knocked down and a café and children’s play area were built in that space. Finally
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