Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

Nowadays every person has a

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. Someone has bigger salaries, but others

lower

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and someone works for

pleasure

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but others only for

money

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.

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, the most frequent question nowadays is what is more important big

salary

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or

job

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satisfaction

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? The first reason, I believe that

job

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satisfaction

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is more important than a high

salary

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. So,

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job

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should make you happy and have a positive effect on your

overall

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wellbeing

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.

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, it is not only important to have a

job

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that is

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paid well, but one that makes you feel fulfilled and satisfied.

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, having a

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that you enjoy will make you feel more motivated and energized,

that

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can have a positive impact on your performance.

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, one of my relatives works as a fireman. His

salary

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is not the best, but he does not leave

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job

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, because he gets

pleasure

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when he saves people.

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, his childhood dream was to

became

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a fireman. In my opinion,

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job

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a job

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that is

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made with

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has a better impact on

ourselves

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than that work

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done only for

money

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. The second reason, why I believe that

job

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satisfaction

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is more important than a high

salary

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, is that it can help you to stay with

the

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current

job

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for a longer time, resulting in a good career and

job

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stability.

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, there is a strong

relation

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relationship

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between

job

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satisfaction

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and productivity. So, people who love their jobs can easily concentrate

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doing their jobs and

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can lead to better results than those who rank

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on

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the first place.

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, my friend is a manager at a supermarket. He started his

job

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as a simple cashier.

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the fact, that he

has

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made his work with

pleasure

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and did not quit the

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, he had a successful career becoming a manager at that store.

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, I strongly believe that it is worth choosing a

job

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for

pleasure

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not

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for

money

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,

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because you have to do

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work every day and if you do it just for

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, probably you will lose

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activity

,

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because

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job

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the job

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should be done with

pleasure

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.