Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.
Nowadays every person has a
job
. Someone has bigger salaries, but others lower
and someone works for Add a missing verb
have lower
pleasure
but others only for money
. Thus
, the most frequent question nowadays is what is more important big salary
or job
satisfaction
?
The first reason, I believe that job
satisfaction
is more important than a high salary
. So, this
job
should make you happy and have a positive effect on your overall
wellbeing
. Correct your spelling
well-being
Moreover
, it is not only important to have a job
that is
paid well, but one that makes you feel fulfilled and satisfied. Additionally
, having a job
that you enjoy will make you feel more motivated and energized, that
can have a positive impact on your performance. Correct pronoun usage
which
For instance
, one of my relatives works as a fireman. His salary
is not the best, but he does not leave this
job
, because he gets pleasure
when he saves people. Furthermore
, his childhood dream was to became
a fireman. In my opinion, Change the verb
become
job
Add an article
a job
the job
that is
made with pleasure
has a better impact on ourselves
than that work Correct pronoun usage
us
that is
done only for money
.
The second reason, why I believe that job
satisfaction
is more important than a high salary
, is that it can help you to stay with the
current Change the word
your
job
for a longer time, resulting in a good career and job
stability. Therefore
, there is a strong relation
between Replace the word
relationship
job
satisfaction
and productivity. So, people who love their jobs can easily concentrate while
doing their jobs and this
can lead to better results than those who rank salary
on
the first place. Change preposition
in
For example
, my friend is a manager at a supermarket. He started his job
as a simple cashier. Due to
the fact, that he has
made his work with Unnecessary verb
apply
pleasure
and did not quit the job
, he had a successful career becoming a manager at that store.
To conclude
, I strongly believe that it is worth choosing a job
for pleasure
not
for Add the comma(s)
,not
money
,
because you have to do Remove the comma
apply
this
work every day and if you do it just for money
, probably you will lose this
activity,
because Remove the comma
apply
job
should be done with Correct article usage
the job
pleasure
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