The charts bellow show teh percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts bellow show teh percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The pie chart illustrates the amount of water used in industry, agriculture and domestic in six different parts of the world.
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, agricultural usage is higher in comparison to other areas, except for North
America
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and Europe, where the industrial need is the highest. Domestic use is the lowest among them. Central
Asia
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, Africa and South East
Asia
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spend well more than 3 quarters of water in agriculture with a proportion of 88%, 84% and 81 % respectively. South
America
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follows with 71% and Europe and North
America
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with less than half the percentage. Europeans and North Americans need it more in an industry with more than half
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and less than 50% respectively. The other parts of the world use less than a quarter. Domestic use is the least with under a quarter in Africa, Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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and more than a quarter for North
America
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, South
America
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and Europe.
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