The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.

The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.
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This
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chart shows the
production
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and consumption per day using
oil
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in China from 1982 to 2006.
Overall
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, before 1993,
oil
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production
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was more the
oil
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consumption and it was suppressed after 1993. Between 1982 and 1990, there were no changes in the use of
oil
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remaining 2
million
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. it significantly increased after 1990 and peaked at 6.2
million
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in 2006.
In contrast
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, the
production
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of
oil
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remained
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million
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from 1986 to 1994. Looking at the graph more closely,
it is clear that
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the use of
oil
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was nearly 2
million
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in 1982 and it doubled in 1998 reaching 4milion.
Furthermore
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, it more than tripled in 2006. The
oil
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production
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was
also
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approximately 2
million
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in 1982.
However
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, there are slight changes from 1993 to 2006 and,
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it did not suppress
oil
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consumption. The
production
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of
oil
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was more than 3
million
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in 2006 and
this
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figure doubled the use of
oil
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in the same period.
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