The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates the amount of four kinds of materials that were recycled between 1982 to 2010 in a specific country.
overall
the recycling rate for Almunium cans and glass containers increased between 1944 to 2010,
while
the percentage of plastic and paper remain the same,
although
there were some increase and decrease in the amount of recycling glass containers. As we can see in the graph the recycling amount of plastic did not change so much
although
between 1990 to 2010 it increased by roughly ten per
cent
,
while
there was a big increase in Almaunium cans recycling in the years 1990 to 2010 especially in 2006 increased by 20 per
cent
.
On the other hand
glass container recycling slightly increased from 1994 to 2010, approximately 7
percent
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, but paper recycling went the opposite to it, year by year as we can see in the graph it declined from 80 per
cent
in 1998 become 70
per
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cent
in 2010.
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  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
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