your english speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport

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Hello, Suzy I am writing
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letter to advise you and explain a new sport that I introduce to you. I recommend that would be nice to learn swimming that you have never learnt swimming before. I think swimming is an important skill in our life, as we can
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cope
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with an unexpected accident like falling on the beach suddenly. And you are keen to play with your friends at the river nowadays. I have
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been
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swimming for 20 years since I was a kid. For the first time, my parents persuaded me to swim after school at the community centre, which is located on Robson
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. I was afraid of swimming at the pool, but I overcame it, I was fascinated by swimming lessons. Now, I am good at swimming, as you know. So, you need to search for any community centre which includes swimming lessons on Google's website, go to the community centre that you choose, and join it.
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, I am able to teach you to swim in person. If you have any concerns about learning it, just call me.
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, I will help you in many ways like how to keep long breathing in the pool, and how to jump from the diving area. I hope you are good luck with the lesson. Lovely, Nari
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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