Write a letter to your college administration department complaining about the college facility. In your letter, include: • what the problem is • how this problem has affected you • what the college should do to fix this problem Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear/ Madam
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a second-year student studying Civil Engineering and I am writing to complain about the poor computer facility on our college campus.
Let me explain the situation in detail. I am a regular user of the computer facilities on our campus for surfing and studying purposes. Until quite recently, I was pleased with
this
facility which helped me a lot in my previous assignments. However
, for the past few ,weeks most of the computers in the laboratory are
not working properly and are always in maintenance mode. It is quite annoying and frustrating that I am unable to complete my current assignment Verb problem
have
due to
the unavailability of these machines. Thus
I left far behind my schedule of completing all the assignments.
I would like to request you to allocate skilled technicians and the required budget to repair these computers. In addition
, try to update all computers with the latest Operating Systems and a few licensed software’s.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Rakesh SoniSubmitted by chirag099.ck on
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coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing could be more formal in line with academic writing standards. Consider using 'Dear Sir or Madam' and 'Yours sincerely' or 'Yours faithfully' as appropriate.
task achievement
The letter addresses the problem effectively and suggests a suitable course of action. However, consider expanding on the impact of the issue on the writer's studies to enhance task response.