Task1; The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Task1; The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of using
water
for three different purposes in North
America
, South
America
,
Europe
, Africa, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
.
Overall
, most of the areas
use
water
in agriculture,
whereas
both
Europe
and
America
have the most
water
consumption in the industrial field. In detail, agricultural
use
of
water
registered the highest rate in South
America
,Africa, Central
Asia
and East
Asia
the percentage that ranged between 71% to 88% of the total consumption.
Furthermore
, the data in
Europe
and
America
showed a slight decline in that purpose in
Europe
and
America
where it is considered to be the second high usage in demand.
However
, industrial
water
use
was the top in
Europe
and
America
which registered 53% and 48% respectively. The percentage of the other areas did not exceed 12&.
Moreover
, the proportion of domestic
use
is considered insufficient, especially in
Asia
with only 7% and Africa with 9%. The figure for
this
consumption experienced the highest
water
use
at homes in South
America
with 19& and in
Europe
at 15&
as well as
13% in North
America
.
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  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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