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The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.

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The line chart illustrates the information about
oil
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production
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 and
consumption
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 per
day
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 in China every 4 years period from 1982 to 2006. The figures are given in
million
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 of
oil
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barrels
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 per
day
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the chart that the
consumption
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 of
oil
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 significant increase after stay remain 8 years since starting year,1982. Meanwhile, the
production
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 minimal grows
also
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 similar to stable.
According to
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 the data,
although
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, in 1982 the
consumption
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 remaining 8 continuing years was lower than the
production
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, it exceed in 1990.
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, a tendency for
consumption
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 higher and higher than
production
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 and rise dramatically by almost approximately 7
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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. Despite, the
production
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 of
oil
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 increasing in 1986, it stayed remained until 1994. It inclines modestly about 3
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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. Interestingly,
oil
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production
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 and
consumption
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 begin the same around 2
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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, but
at the end
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 of the
period
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 the
consumption
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 doubled as the
production
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, production, consumption, day, million, barrels with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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